Sunday 15 July 2012

Sorrow

A deserted car park, full of shadows.
Showers of rain fall as though the sky is bleeding,
And two cats are fighting out of sight, wails like anguish sounding.
These ice-cold raindrops are tears
Against my skin.

A journey across London,
Stifling heat and sweat- a train filled with unknown faces.
Then, across the graveyard, grieving mourners gather like leaves.
The air is filled with powerful history-
They have been lost.
They were left behind.
They wept.

2 comments:

  1. Very creative, I think its very well thought about and carefully structured

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  2. Wow, that's really powerful, but a bit depressing : )

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